Friday, November 20, 2009

Week8!!

OMG ITS TEST WEEK!!! We had a test on advance English on Monday. Fortunately for me, I found the test quite simple and expect to score high marks for it. We were tested on everything that has been taught the past 8 weeks and I manage to remember almost everything that have been taught. For the essay part of the test, we were asked to write a compare and contrast paragraph on the light up at orchard road and in marina bay. It was a simple essay and I hope to score high in this test. For the rest of the lesson in the week, mr gunna manage to finish everything on paragraph and started teaching us how to write a good essay on Friday. He taught us the thesis sentence in the introduction paragraph and all. Thesis sentence was hard to understand at first but as the lesson went on I manage to catch the jizz of it. I hope in the next 2 weeks I would be able to write an almost perfect essay that would be fit to call it a diploma student essay haha!!!

PEACE!!

week7!!

Compare and contrast paragraph!!! This is what we were taught this week. It was very interesting to me as I love comparing and contrasting things. We were taught about the two different ways we can compare and contrast. First it is by blocks and next it is point by point. We were asked to compare and contrast Hawaii and Alaska I found it quite simple to do as I love comparing stuff haha. I hope this week will turn out to be a better week as I had a dreadful week last week. CYA next week

PEACE

week 6!!

ITS SPRING ROLL!!!! Haha this week we were taught how to write progressive paragraph we were shown a video on a Vietnamese guy teaching how to make Vietnamese spring rolls. And again we were asked by our lovely mr guna to write a progressive paragraph on this. I think this is quite simple than expected. Other than that it have been a really dull week for me as many things have been happening this week. Arguments with group members problems with classmates and many more haha. But its life we have to buck up and carry on with it as the world waits for no one. Haha..

Till next week

PEACE!!!

week 5!!

This week was a very short week as in advance English the only thing I can recall was when mr guna showed us a movie called night at the museum. He than ask us to write a paragraph describing the museum as we were taught description paragraph that week. It was a very nice movie on a whole and it was good practice for us. Personally I feel I am very weak at describing stuff even though I have a decent command on the English language I feel this would probably be my weakest link as I find it really hard to express my emotions and all haha.

PEACE!!!!

week 4

Week 4!!!

ITS WEEK FOUR HAHA TIME FLYS SO FAST!! Work work work that’s all it have been this term. Projects after projects I hope they would be up to standard and decent. Incoherent, this is the word that my friend from USA used to describe me haha. Its because my standard of English is nothing compared to theirs even though I feel mine is good but I guess we all aren’t perfect. For this week advance English class we were taught about coherence in our paragraphs and transition signals. For this I feel that its quite easy as coherence in a paragraph is quite easy to understand it’s the same for transition signals. We were taught about this in secondary school but in shatec we were taught the scientific way of essay writing haha. Pretty cool ya?? Hehe ok will blog more next week

PEACE

Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Hawaii vs Alaska

Hawaii and Alaska are both nice places to visit with a few differences. For one is its accommodations, Alaska offers quality hotels with a basic to luxury needs. On the other hand in Hawaii, there are a wide range of excellent hotels and condo from luxury to budget prices. The climate of the two states are also different. In Hawaii, it often rains in the summer and is hot and humid. While in Alaska, it seldom rains during the summer and there are little or no humidity in Alaska and the temperature is perfect in the summer. Lastly, both of them offer different type of natural beauty. Alaska offers chugach and mount mckinley and glaciers in Alaska. However Hawaii offers volcano nation park with canons and beautiful beaches. Both states are different in some way or another and are two interesting places to visit.

Saturday, November 7, 2009

Vietnamese spring roll

Topic: Making a Vietnamese spring roll

Topic sentence: Making a Vietnamese spring roll is easy if you follow these instructions.

Supporting details/ steps:
First, put two cups of oil in your frying wok.
Once the oil starts bubbling you can add the spring roll in the wok.
When they are golden brown turn them over.
After that, drip them dry on a rack to get the excess oil out.
Meanwhile, lay a piece of lettuce on a plate and put the spring roll on top of it
Finally, serve the spring roll with lettuce and a dipping sauce.

Concluding sentence: Once all this is done, you would be able to enjoy your Vietnamese spring roll.



Paragraph!

Making a Vietnamese spring roll is easy if you follow these instructions. First, put two cups of oil in your frying wok. Once the oil starts bubbling you can add the spring roll in, after a while you can add another in the wok. Try not to add to many in as you might have some problem turning them. When they are golden brown turn them over. After that, drip them dry on a rack to get rid of the excess oil out. Meanwhile, lay a piece of lettuce on a plate, and put the spring rolls on top of it. Finally, serve the spring roll with lettuce and a dipping sauce. Once all this is done, you would be able to enjoy your Vietnamese spring roll.